tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post3752997381506076755..comments2023-10-17T07:02:46.479-05:00Comments on This Rocketship Will Crash: Miracle Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04100058485641060513noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post-56311456987456518832009-02-18T01:47:00.000-06:002009-02-18T01:47:00.000-06:00Nice page turner. About half way through it start...Nice page turner. About half way through it starts moving very fast, waterfalling till the end.<BR/>Not real sure if this story absolutely needs it, but could it use a better description of "place"? Main priest moves from city to country. Is that enough?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post-2406568971745441052008-05-03T09:37:00.000-05:002008-05-03T09:37:00.000-05:00Thanks! You are too kind, I am sure.Thanks! You are too kind, I am sure.Miracle Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04100058485641060513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post-78233318173156121162008-05-03T06:35:00.000-05:002008-05-03T06:35:00.000-05:00this is an amazing story!this is an amazing story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com