tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post105926178444342730..comments2023-10-17T07:02:46.479-05:00Comments on This Rocketship Will Crash: Miracle Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04100058485641060513noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3987976.post-91271818348947546412008-09-18T00:15:00.000-05:002008-09-18T00:15:00.000-05:00i really like the line "translucent like the rice ...i really like the line "translucent like the rice paper of a vietnamese spring roll." ive had 'em and they are see through, almost, pretty much, and they are rubbery... and edible.<BR/>also, more importantly, i like the way you use one or two good, or great, similes in each story. to use more than two would detract or diminish the overall value, imhoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com